Battered-Prawn's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Barrel Round Up]

Nice use of API

Nice game, coded entirely by AS you say, nice.
I must say the controls are a bit annoying, I would suggest changing the point of rotation on the character.. as is it's easiest to drive backwards :P

[One on One: Gun Fight]

Nice..

But alot was lacking.
- Add a background.
- Modify controls (going faster would be nice).
- Add more options, maybe mouse control?
- Improve character detail.
- Add proper menus

But still, it was good. And with practise you could be alot better.

RiotFlash responds:

-Add a background
I do have one. Its supposed to be snow. Lazy XD.

-Modify Controls
I just learned how to make a turbo button. I didnt at the time.

-Add more options
Yet another good idea.

-Improve character detail
I suck at drawing. I am trying to improve.

-Add proper menus
Yeah, I suppose I should of.

Great review. It had a nice list of things to improve. Very helpful.

[iBall]

Could have been better (too hard!)

Did you purposely make it too hard to get past even the fist level?!
-Make the ball respond faster
-Give more chances (i.e. 3 lives, one for each hit)

Well at least there is a good potential game under there somewhere.

[Platform Racing]

WOOOT! -God-

I managed to bag 1st for quite a while, with the name 'God' I racked up 600 points.

Anyway, an addictive and fun online multiplayer game.
To improve, I'd say add lots more levels (20 in total would be sweet!), the graphics were terrible aswell so make them more interesting and detailed, and add more weapons.

[Ragdoll - Free Ball 2]

Thanks

I'm glad you noticed my recommendations from the last game :D

[Managing Flash Pro 8]

Check for errors

Opening scenes is shift+F2 (not shift+F12) shift+F12 is publish.

Other than that, a nice easy tutorial, keep it up :D

[Bump Blob]

It was fun

I enjoyed it, so its worth getting past blam, not very origional but the level builder was quite nice. to improve, try and sweeten up the gfx, and you could have messed around with the vcam to see if its better having the vcam loosely follow the 'blob' instead of just seeing everything.

keep it up ;)

[Ragdoll - Free Ball]

Nice, but too easy.

The game is way too easy, all you have to do it move left and right and you can keep the ball up for hours. apart from that its a kool game.

to improve you could put in different gravity settings for the ball after different periods of time, or add more balls after certain times, or add obstacles.

[Atomic Bonding]

:D Es muy bueno y muy educativo.

Very good :D. I was learning about this earlier today, well... a more simplified version anyway. I have to ask, what type of music did you use? because I love that funky sort of south armerican-ish trumpets tambourines etc.

[IndestructoTank!]

dangerously addictive.

after playing on and off for about six hours... literally, i finally meet the 1/2 million mark getting 4th in the leaderboard. then i submit it, Charlie Palmer is very happy, BUT. the #?!#£&£ing internet is #?!#£&£ing down! Grah im so angry. is there any way i could get on the leaderboards? i did prt screen it.

very good and addictive game that can lead people to the edge of suicide =(